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June 07, 2012


Rolando Teco

Hi Johnny. I know the play and the scene to which you're referring and reading this post makes me curious to hear the rewrite. While the language never bothered me, (in spite of the fact of my own unfamiliarity with that particular sexual territory) I can see how the character who spoke those lines might possibly be even more compelling with a different choice of words used to describe what she describes.

Cool. Can't wait. Invite me to the next read. :)

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